Selasa, 22 Maret 2011






Writing 1                                                            
Descriptive my idol                                                 
Process 5                                                           
      
JUSTIN DREW BIEBER
My idol is Justin Drew Bieber who stage name is Justin Bieber. He is an R&B singer, a song writer, and an actor. He was born on March 1st, 1994 in Ontario, London. He comes from broken family. Although it, many people know him because he has a good career.


Justin bieber is good looking. He has brown short hair, brown eyes, white skin, and a square face. He has a medium weight and middle tall. He is around 170 centimeters tall and 60 kilograms weigh. I think he has a good personality.
When Justin Bieber was a child, he interested to play hockey, soccer, and chess. Now he is interest to plays piano, drum, guitar, and trompet.
Justin Bieber has many fans in the world. Like from Indonesia, Malaysia, Australia, etc. Mostly the fans of Justin Bieber are teenagers. Justin Bieber is a handsome boy and he has a nice voice. Also he is a good dancer because of that many teenagers especially girls admire him, including me.
When Justin was 12 years old, he followed song competition in his city and he got 2 champions. After that, Justine sends his performance video to his friends on YouTube. So there are many performances that he uploads on YouTube. In 2008, Justin Bieber was discovered by Scooter Broun, who looked the performance video Justine on YouTube. At the moment Justine becomes a singer. He released a new album with title “Baby”. Many people like that song. Include me, I really like that song. In his album Justine looks handsome and cool with his dance. Much song he released, like “Never Let You Go”, and “You Smile” in 2010.
Justin Bieber is a good person for me. I am amazed of him. He is my idol because he can do everything for his life until he get success career like now. Although he comes from broke family.





3 komentar:

  1. I think your essay is good enough but pay attention with your spelling and with your grammar such as in paragraph 5 line 2. i think it's supposed to be past tense..

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  2. you have a good essay..

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