Senin, 23 Mei 2011

Writing 1 activity 4             
Comparison essay                                  
Process 2                                                

Using of Flash Disk or Disk Drive

Before the invention of flash disk, all of people used disk drive to save their data. Around 1990’s had discovered a hardware to save our data. It called flash disk. Disk drive and flash disk are so different. The purpose this essay is to contras between flash disk and disk drive. The different of flash disk and disk drive are merk, capacity and cost.
The first one, I will tell you about the type of flash disk and disk drive. There are many kind merk of flash disk such as Kingston, Toshiba, SanDisk, and Van Disk. Main while the types of disk drive are hard disk drive (HDD), Floppy disk drive (FDD) and optical disk. As we can see flash disk has many types than disk drives.
Then, I will discuss about capacity. The different between flash disk and disk drive is flash disk has many types of capacities such as MB (Mega Byte) and GB (Giga Byte). The capacities of flash disk are from 5, 13 MB, 2 GB, 4 GB, and 16 GB. Main while disk drive just has one capacity. It is MB because that disk drive only can fill with Microsoft office.
Next, it is about cost of flash disk and disk drive. The flash disk has many kind prices. There are from Rp. 40.000 until Rp. 150.000. The cost of flash disk is more expensive than disk drive. Main while disk drive, it is about Rp. 5000. It is cheaper than flashdisk.
Beside that the different of flash disk and disk drive is about usable of them. Flash disk can use to computer and laptop, but the disk drive just only computer because disk drive is old invention. So, it can just use to computer.
       Here are the main different of flash disk and disk drive. As we can see flash disk is modern thing to save your dataes. It has many different. I think you will choose the flash disk because it has much superiority than disk drive.

6 komentar:

  1. haii cika.. thanks for your comment..
    in the last paragraph line 2 wtite
    "As we can see flash disk is modern thing to save your dataes"
    what do you mean of DATAES?? it is many data?
    if yes, i thinks you should write many data..

    keep writing
    :)

    BalasHapus
  2. thx ami..

    yeah i mean its many data...

    :))

    BalasHapus
  3. i think your essay is good but you must add many information to make it more clear..
    thank you :)

    BalasHapus
  4. Your essay is good ...
    You can Contrast between Flash disk and Disk Drive ...

    But I can find Some mistakes in your Grammer, like :
    The purpose this essay is to contras between flash disk and disk drive.
    You used "to" after be , it is worng ...
    As we know, we not allow to write down like this ...

    so far so good, and keep Writing ...

    BalasHapus
  5. cickka,,

    so far your essay is good enough,,
    but keep pay attention about grammar, diction and punctuation mark,,,

    that's from me!!

    keep writing!!
    :)

    BalasHapus
  6. hi cika...

    I suggest you to write many data than dataes because is not common...

    yhank you...

    BalasHapus